디시인사이드 갤러리

갤러리 이슈박스, 최근방문 갤러리

갤러리 본문 영역

교육부 비판하는 글 영어로 써 봄

ㅇㅇ(39.115) 2024.10.07 23:45:24
조회 128 추천 2 댓글 0

Public education's shortcomings, especially in preparing students for competitive university admissions in major cities like Seoul, highlight a significant disparity between students who can access additional resources, such as private tutoring, and those who cannot. Many argue that, without supplementary education outside the public school system, it is nearly impossible to gain admission to top-tier universities in Korea. Several factors contribute to this inequity.


First, the structure of the college entrance system in Korea often prioritizes ranking students over fostering comprehensive learning. The system, particularly with its use of the 9-grade system for early admissions (수시), tends to raise the difficulty of exams to distinguish students by academic performance rather than encouraging broader or deeper learning. As a result, students without access to external academic support struggle to keep up with the complexity of the material.


In comparison to students who receive expert guidance and tutoring, those from disadvantaged backgrounds face additional challenges. These students may lack the knowledge, skills, and support systems necessary to navigate the highly competitive educational environment. In cases where parents are unable or unwilling to provide academic or emotional support, such students are left to struggle on their own, which further widens the achievement gap. This disparity is exacerbated by the fact that even the most diligent students may not know how to approach studying effectively without proper guidance.


Moreover, the burden placed on public school teachers often prevents them from offering the personalized assistance many students need. Teachers are typically overwhelmed by administrative tasks such as creating lesson materials, grading, conducting performance evaluations, and attending meetings. This leaves them little time to focus on individual students, particularly those who may be falling behind. In some cases, students seeking extra help have reported negative responses from their teachers, indicating a lack of capacity within the system to meet individual needs.


Another issue is the high reliance on performance evaluations that require skills students may not have been adequately taught in public school settings. For example, students are often tasked with writing essays, both in Korean and English or presenting arguments on complex topics, which are difficult to accomplish without additional private instruction. In such cases, students who lack private tutoring are at a clear disadvantage, resulting in lower performance and further discouragement.


Furthermore, the grading system in public schools, especially under the 9th-grade system, makes it difficult for many students to achieve top marks. If a certain percentage of students exceed the expected performance threshold, the exams are made even harder in subsequent rounds, ensuring that only a select few can maintain high rankings. This competitive design, rather than offering support to struggling students, serves to separate the high achievers from the rest, leaving many students behind without the means to catch up.


In addition to the limitations within schools, the quality of private tutoring centers (학원) can vary widely. Some centers focus more on maintaining their business than on improving student performance. Even students who attend prestigious tutoring centers might not always benefit from the education they receive. Often, instructors at these centers rely heavily on standardized materials, such as EBS lectures, without offering personalized strategies for success, raising questions about such programs' overall effectiveness.


This environment places significant pressure on students from disadvantaged backgrounds. In homes where parents are financially strained or emotionally unavailable, the stress and negativity often transfer to the children. These students, already struggling academically, are further burdened by family issues, which can lead to a cycle of frustration, poor academic performance, and eventually, a sense of learned helplessness.


The competitive nature of the education system, combined with the inequitable distribution of resources, creates a social dynamic in which students are often unwilling to help their peers for fear of creating more competition. This lack of collaboration is in direct contrast to what school records (학생부) emphasize, which is the importance of cooperation and strong interpersonal relationships. However, in reality, the pressure to succeed academically overrides the ideal of mutual support, leaving students isolated and stressed.


In conclusion, public education, in its current state, fails to provide equal opportunities for all students. Those without access to additional resources such as private tutoring are at a severe disadvantage, both academically and socially. The system is designed to perpetuate inequality by rewarding those who can afford extra help and leaving behind those who cannot. For students from lower-income backgrounds, this often results in not only poor academic outcomes but also long-term impacts on self-esteem, mental health, and future opportunities in higher education, employment, and personal relationships. The education system, as it stands, continues to reflect and reinforce socioeconomic disparities, making it difficult for students from disadvantaged backgrounds to succeed.

추천 비추천

2

고정닉 0

0

댓글 영역

전체 댓글 0
본문 보기

하단 갤러리 리스트 영역

왼쪽 컨텐츠 영역

갤러리 리스트 영역

갤러리 리스트
번호 제목 글쓴이 작성일 조회 추천
설문 현역으로 군대 안 간게 의아한 스타는? 운영자 25/06/30 - -
AD 보험상담은 디시공식설계사에게 받으세요! 운영자 24/08/28 - -
AD [조경필X김상훈] 전기기사 2회실기 10점 역전플랜 공개 운영자 25/06/19 - -
공지 취업 갤러리 이용 안내 [104] 운영자 05.08.16 88463 40
2151069 본인 정도면 잘 들어간거임???? ㅇㅇ(118.235) 10:15 6 0
2151068 테더 판매 매입 고라파덕(211.49) 10:12 4 0
2151067 국내 사무실 취갤러(211.49) 10:10 6 0
2151066 명의자관리 세탁업무 세탁업무(125.7) 10:08 9 0
2151065 유심 정심 막심 후심 유심업체(49.254) 10:07 9 0
2151064 사수가 카프킥 때리면 어떻게 대처함??10대때림.. ㄷㄷ(223.39) 10:06 10 0
2151063 개인원한 복수 잉지기(211.49) 10:05 13 0
2151062 기능사 실기 합격률 떴네요 취갤러(183.98) 10:04 14 2
2151061 6개월차 실수령 300 월급 루팡 중이다 이기 ㅇㅇ(118.235) 10:01 20 0
2151060 사장새끼 죽일까?? 아니다 그러면 깜방가지 취갤러(106.102) 10:01 10 0
2151058 하 좆같네 [1] ㅇㅇ(1.221) 09:57 31 0
2151056 본인 스펙좀 봐주삼.. ㅇㅇ(218.234) 09:52 25 0
2151055 돈은 도대체 어케 모으는거냐 ㅇㅇ(210.121) 09:43 23 0
2151054 20살 사회초년생 첫직장 8인 중소기업 다니는데 [1] 취갤러(106.102) 09:42 46 1
2151053 다들 힘내라 대두좆밥존니잘생기지않았냐 (121.124) 09:33 16 0
2151052 공장가기 vs 특수청소 [3] ㅇㅇ(118.235) 09:32 46 1
2151051 경계선지능인데 알아낸 인간의 모순점. [2] 취갤러(106.102) 09:30 52 2
2151050 취업 갤러리 공식 채팅방 오세요 취갤러(223.39) 09:25 18 1
2151048 아무리봐도 일본취업이 나은듯 [4] ㅇㅇ(1.227) 09:12 77 5
2151046 시설 올려치기 미쳤네.ㅋㅋㅋㅋ 취갤러(218.237) 08:56 55 0
2151045 마래푸는 커녕 좆그지 애미애비 밑에서 자란듯 [2] ㅇㅇ(220.93) 08:53 34 0
2151044 잦은이직 잦은퇴사가.. [1] 게이1124갤로그로 이동합니다. 08:53 59 0
2151043 누가 더 유명함 마이클 조던 비욘세 디바(59.28) 08:32 20 0
2151042 누가 더 유명함 마이클 조던 비욘세 디바(59.28) 08:23 21 0
2151041 그나이쳐먹었으면 부모집애서 좀 나가라 [4] 미나즈키갤로그로 이동합니다. 08:23 81 2
2151040 교정직 내년이 막차인 이유 취갤러(39.7) 08:19 53 0
2151039 장애인인데 도대체 써주지도 않고 죽고싶다ㅡㅡ [4] 취갤러(58.125) 08:19 72 1
2151037 다들 힘내라 정병성병우리형가수할지미술할지(121.124) 08:15 19 0
2151036 취업하신 분들 [2] 취갤러(175.117) 08:12 46 0
2151034 좆거루새끼 양심없다면서 들고온게 마래푸 씨발아 [4] ㅇㅇ(220.93) 07:57 66 1
2151033 열심히 살아야한다 <<--- 이게 전형적인 사회가 만든 가스라이팅임 [1] ㅇㅇ갤로그로 이동합니다. 07:55 70 1
2151031 아 좆소 탈출하고싶다 취갤러(211.36) 07:52 33 0
2151030 좆거루새끼들은 양심이란게 없지 [18] 미나즈키갤로그로 이동합니다. 07:50 126 0
2151029 내남친 너무 무능력한거같음.. [4] 취갤러(123.215) 07:46 108 0
2151028 오늘 면접인데 벌써부터 떨린다ㄷ ㅇㅇ(59.12) 07:23 65 0
2151026 오늘도 다들 화이팅해라 취갤러(120.50) 07:21 19 0
2151025 같은 연봉이면 무조건 지방가야 함. [6] 미나즈키갤로그로 이동합니다. 07:19 135 0
2151023 난 디씨하는 사람들이 가장 무섭다... [1] 취갤러(106.102) 07:16 54 1
2151015 [단독] 이진숙 후보자, 제자 논문 10여개 표절 의혹 ㅇㅇ(118.235) 06:48 34 0
2151013 수학존나 못하는데 전기기사가능? [3] ㅇㅇ(125.137) 06:33 73 0
2151012 본인 초봉으로 딱 5천 이상만 받고싶은데 가능? [2] 취갤러(59.19) 06:30 77 0
2151008 진짜 인생이 끝없이 말아먹는 애들 특징이 [2] 취갤러(59.19) 06:19 109 7
2151006 월200 나오면 뭐할거같음? 이응갤로그로 이동합니다. 06:13 85 0
2151003 퇴근하고 컨디션 좋은줄 알았는데 취갤러(211.112) 05:59 43 0
2151001 좆소 식품공장 다니는데 피부 꺼먼 앰창새끼가 나 특근 안한다고 꼽주더라 ㅇㅇ게히(118.39) 05:45 57 1
2150999 IT 전직종 취업 현황 취갤러(115.23) 05:16 141 0
2150997 저 인생 망했나요 [10] 취갤러(112.170) 05:15 162 0
2150993 7/10 업계 1위 기업 면접 본다 ㅇㅇ(106.101) 05:01 46 0
2150988 28살 백수많냐? [3] ㅇㅇ(118.235) 04:18 147 0
뉴스 배우 신구, 부인과 사별…39살 늦깍이로 결혼해 51년간 해로 디시트렌드 07.03
갤러리 내부 검색
제목+내용게시물 정렬 옵션

오른쪽 컨텐츠 영역

실시간 베스트

1/8

뉴스

디시미디어

디시이슈

1/2